Here is a story I've been building the last few days and plan on entering:
Child’s Play
He followed as the bubble whimsically floated up, settling carelessly next to a butterfly and some flowers. Little Alan squinted at the fragile orb: imagining. A door, a window, a chimney, he developed a rainbow-glass house for the butterfly.
What opulence!
The child laughed. The bug fluttered away. The housing bubble burst.
2 comments:
I like it, though I think you should change the comma after "chimney" to a semicolon, if I am interpreting this right.
I love it. When do they announce the winners?
PS. Y'all need to add a way to see the most recent comments across all posts.
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